Sa pagkakaalam ko nman kapag poetry or songs, you can write or express your thoughts sa paraang alam mo, even wrong grammar. You can even invent new words, kung gusto mo. 😂
Sows kahit poetry yan hindi mapapalitan yun rule na pag are ang ginagamit dapat plural so dapat talaga There ARE no villainS. Kung iinsist nya yun Villain without an S dapat There IS no villain. Ganern!
Bakit ba triggered agad kapag tinama yung maling grammar? Wala naman sigurong masama dun di ba? Hindi naman nakakababa ng dignidad o pagkatao. Sana marunong na lang tayo tumanggap ng correction kung makakatulong naman to improve our skills. Sana we all understand the difference between negative feedback and constructive criticism.
1030 hindi rin ba tinuro sa‘yo na kapag poetry and song writing you can express your thoughts sa paraang alam mo. And yes, even wrong grammar and investing new words( just write a footnote). Pwede mo ngang pagbali baliktarin ang mga words mo. 😂 I am actually surprise na ang daming feeling matalino dito pero hindi nman alam ang rule na yan. Nakakaloka.
I admire her courage to share her poem/ writings. She's not a gifted writer and yet here she is. Maybe she will get better in time, maybe not. Many better writers never share their pieces publicly (maybe because they fear rejection and criticism?) so courage I think counts as talent too. Happy birthday Kylie!
Agree her pieces remind me of my poems in HS. Nothing left to interpret and the rhyming can be better. But i think it's more of a note to self rather than a poem as an art.
By heart VS from the heart She knows the poem by heart (knows all the words without having to read it). She wrote the poem from the heart (in a very sincere way)
May mga feeling grammar nazi pa. Wala nmang alam. You can write your poem or lyrics of your song the way you want it. Lol, ako din nanalo. 1st time ang last time ko nagsulat ng poem. Lol
daming alam ni kylie. pa deep ang babaita
ReplyDeleteWala namang depth sa totoo lang. No need for interpretation. It’s more like a note to self rather than a poem.
DeleteSa pagkakamali naman niya eh mukhang wala siya sa pagkatuto
DeleteReborn na nga e , nilagyan pa ng again, redundant ito
DeleteGrammar nazi here. “There are no VILLAINS” po dapat. Pati na “Like I wish I could SHED every reckless sin.” You’re welcome.
ReplyDeleteEdi ikaw na
Delete@1204 I so agree kung gagawa na lang din ng poetry tapos i-post pa Sana chineck muna kung tama ang grammar.
DeleteAng tawag po dyan ay poetic license. The writer/poet can at times deviate from rules on grammar and syntax to maintain rhythmic structure of the poem.
DeleteSa pagkakaalam ko nman kapag poetry or songs, you can write or express your thoughts sa paraang alam mo, even wrong grammar. You can even invent new words, kung gusto mo. 😂
DeleteNa autocorrect ata yung shed to should, hehe
Deletesa pinas k lang tlaga makakita ng mga perfect, big deal konting pagkakamali lang
DeleteSows kahit poetry yan hindi mapapalitan yun rule na pag are ang ginagamit dapat plural so dapat talaga There ARE no villainS. Kung iinsist nya yun Villain without an S dapat There IS no villain. Ganern!
DeleteYou are correct. Thank you for the nazi-ing, I love it.
DeleteAt least we know it is not a poem generated by an AI ChatGPT
DeleteYan na naman ang excuses ba porke poem keri lang na mali mali grammar. Nothing wrong with correcting imo.
Delete225 mag aral ka muna bago ka mangbash at feeling grammar Nazi kulang nman sa kaalaman. 😂
DeleteBakit ba triggered agad kapag tinama yung maling grammar? Wala naman sigurong masama dun di ba? Hindi naman nakakababa ng dignidad o pagkatao. Sana marunong na lang tayo tumanggap ng correction kung makakatulong naman to improve our skills. Sana we all understand the difference between negative feedback and constructive criticism.
Delete1030 hindi rin ba tinuro sa‘yo na kapag poetry and song writing you can express your thoughts sa paraang alam mo. And yes, even wrong grammar and investing new words( just write a footnote). Pwede mo ngang pagbali baliktarin ang mga words mo. 😂 I am actually surprise na ang daming feeling matalino dito pero hindi nman alam ang rule na yan. Nakakaloka.
DeleteLol. Nung nagka anak ka na dapat dun ka na din di reckless
ReplyDeleteSame exact thoughts.
DeleteGirl shut up 12:20am
DeletePag parent dapat perfect na baks? Tao pa rin, minsan di pala tama yung nagiging desisyon.
DeleteI admire her courage to share her poem/ writings. She's not a gifted writer and yet here she is. Maybe she will get better in time, maybe not. Many better writers never share their pieces publicly (maybe because they fear rejection and criticism?) so courage I think counts as talent too. Happy birthday Kylie!
ReplyDeleteAgree her pieces remind me of my poems in HS. Nothing left to interpret and the rhyming can be better. But i think it's more of a note to self rather than a poem as an art.
DeleteShe wrote it by heart
DeleteBy heart VS from the heart
DeleteShe knows the poem by heart (knows all the words without having to read it).
She wrote the poem from the heart (in a very sincere way)
Maganda sana si girl pero may aura sya na hindi likeable.
ReplyDeleteNanalo ako sa poetry contest nung college student ako. Ang masasabi ko lang, masaya ako kapag nagsusulat ng poem ang mga tao. Good job! Be positive.
ReplyDeleteMay mga feeling grammar nazi pa. Wala nmang alam. You can write your poem or lyrics of your song the way you want it. Lol, ako din nanalo. 1st time ang last time ko nagsulat ng poem. Lol
DeleteAy gawa rin kayo ng Poem nyo hindi yong gagaling nyong mag correct, Walang pakialaman wall nya yan.. Sa wall nyo fun kayo mag eenglish
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